Friday, May 27, 2011

shadow and sun story

raven: what a good day it is!

patch: not for me, raven.

raven: silly dog, everyone needs a good day!

patch: you annoy me.

raven: patch, why did you say that?

patch: cuz i don't like you.

raven: you.... don't like me? =(  waaaaaaa!

patch: shut up, raven, i need to think.

raven: i'm running away and i'm never coming back!

patch: whoopee! okay, good!

raven runs away.  after a while,

patch: i miss her.

raven: i'm still here.

patch: really?

raven: yep. the whole time, i was up above you.

patch: really?

raven: yep! you have a friend.

patch: i... do?

raven: yep!

patch: who?

raven: me, silly puppy!

THE END



8 comments:

  1. Oh I LOVE this Brooke! Fantastic story :)

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  2. Wonderful.

    A shadow is company, the one above, and at other times the one that emerges as you walk past a street lamp.

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  3. Story collages are awesome. I wonder what kind of dialogue I could come up with for a glass of Guinness...

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  4. aww this is great girl :) You should check out my giveaway I'm having on my blog to win a Bobbi Brown eyeshadow compact :)

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  5. Loved this - very nice!

    Have a lovely day...

    :-) Anna

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  6. That's a pretty awesome cat. I like the multicolored touch.

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